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Chained by heartbreak,
Puzzled by looks,
Misguided by power, 
Stabbed by sadness.

Buried under work, 
Fooled by the temporary, 
Morphed by anger,
Shunned for differences.

Trapped by grief, 
Stung by results,
Blinded by fury, 
Weakened by words.

Everyone has flaws,
But flaws make us
Perfectly human.
This is a poem I wrote after a long day.

THIS IS OLD. LIKE, MY FIRST POEM ON THIS SITE. PLEASE, I'VE IMPROVED IN POERTY SO STOP FAVING THIS. ITS OLD ART, NOT SOMETHING IM PROUD OF. 
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AshenSnowflakes Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2014
*slowly raises hand* excuse me, I don't mean to sound mean... But you seem to on here persecuting people who ship things you don't like, and you see them as flaws... But in this poem you say flaws are part of being human... I'm a bit confused at your line of logic, Ms. Enemom.

But also, I think that this poem is beautifully written! You should be proud of this, no matter how old it is. It's a darn good "early on" poem, if you ask me... ^^
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Enemom Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Yeah, too bad I don't write poetry anymore. I'm writing a story. 
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AshenSnowflakes Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2014
Aw. =/
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Zylund Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
This is such a fantastic work of literature n_n Keep up the great work! c:
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Enemom Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Stop looking at my old work this is shit
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Zylund Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
This was the first thing I saw in your gallery, I had not noticed it said 2013.

but it good.
I like this piece. a lot.

I'll look at your newer works though~
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Enemom Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks. 
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Babou-Shka Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2013
This is quite lovely. I like the rhythm a lot.
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AlthaeaBuddy Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2013
Great!! The more I see from you, the more impressed I am. :)

The short sentences work very well, conveying your meaning with the use of just a few words, which I think is great.

I'm too lazy to think of any tips for you. It's late, and I really should be in bed. :P

Anyways, you're a great writer. :D
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Enemom Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Hey. 

It's been a while. Why don't you check out some more of my works? I have gotten better!
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